Blog #11

Jake: Looking down and KICKING the dirt, with his hands behind his back.
"Lady I love you and I'm sorry I missed our viola practice, I was just out adventuring with Finn and V.U.P, I..."
LADY RAINICORN interrupts
Lady Rainicorn: Speaking rapidly in KOREAN and POINTING an accusing nub/hoof at JAKE.
 "제이크, 그 뱀파이어 유니콘 페가수스 소녀와 항상 아웃, 그녀는 우리 사랑하는 사이에 온다." (Jake, you're always out with that Vampire Unicorn Pegasus girl, she's coming between us darling.)
Jake: With an astonished look on his face.
 "What?!?! No way, V.U.P and I are strictly friends!"
Lady Rainicorn: Narrows her eyes and raises her voice even more.
"아, 그래? 저희 비올라 세션에 나타나지 않았을 때, 당신과 그녀의 다른 하루를 보았다. 실행 및 꽃 마시 멜로를 통해 점프!" (Oh yeah? I saw you and HER the other day, when you didn't show up for our viola session. Running and jumping through the flowering marshmallows!)
Jake:
 "Sweetheart, we were running from a horde of angry goblins!"
Lady Rainicorn: Tears begin forming around her eyes now
"난 신경 안 써, 그것은 기본적으로 같은이야!" (I don't care, it's basically the same thing!)

*She then flies away crying, leaving Jake confused and somewhat upset.*

Blog #10

(The scene that moves the story forward is when Finn observes VUP leaving the Nightosphere and returning to the land of Ooo. Finn sees this event and realizes that VUP is evil, and becomes conflicted and runs to Marceline for help since she knows all about the goings on in the Nightosphere.)

Finn runs to Marceline's house and enters abruptly with sweat running down his worried face.

Finn: Marceline, my life is conflicting on itself! Jake and VUP and the Nightosphere and Lady Rainicorn and!
(he's rambling and Marceline cuts him off)
Marceline: FINN! Calm down, and say it again slower this time.
Finn: (rambling quickly) OK sooooo we met this Vampire Unicorn Pegasus from the Nightosphere but I had no idea she was from the Nightosphere see she only speaks Spanish but Jake and I and her all went adventuring together. And I see now that she was kinda potentially maybe trying to manipulate us. We destroyed evil and she kinda seemed to like the powernessy stuff a little too much. Jake wouldn't believe me if I tried to tell him she was evil cause he knows I think him and Lady Rainicorn should make up!
Marceline: Calm down Finn it's okay I promise, how about you and I make a pro con list? We can figure this all out I promise Finn.

Blog #9

Jake:
"Lady I love you and I'm sorry I missed our viola practice, I was just out adventuring with Finn and V.U.P, I..."
Lady Rainicorn:
 "제이크, 그 뱀파이어 유니콘 페가수스 소녀와 항상 아웃, 그녀는 우리 사랑하는 사이에 온다." (Jake, you're always out with that Vampire Unicorn Pegasus girl, she's coming between us darling.)
Jake: "What?!?! No way, V.U.P and I are strictly friends!"
Lady Rainicorn:
"아, 그래? 저희 비올라 세션에 나타나지 않았을 때, 당신과 그녀의 다른 하루를 보았다. 실행 및 꽃 마시 멜로를 통해 점프!" (Oh yeah? I saw you and HER the other day, when you didn't show up for our viola session. Running and jumping through the flowering marshmallows!)
Jake:
 "Sweetheart, we were running from a horde of angry goblins!"
Lady Rainicorn:
"난 신경 안 써, 그것은 기본적으로 같은이야!" (I don't care, it's basically the same thing!)

*She then flies away crying, leaving Jake confused a somewhat upset.*

Blog 7

Opening Scene

            The episode begins with Finn and Jake walking through the woods in the land of Ooo. Finn asks Jake about the meaning of their lives and the scene snaps to a flashback of the first television episode of Adventure Time where Finn has his bucket list written on his arm, something about slaying goblins and fighting evil. It snaps back to the present where Finn looks like he's just had an out-of-body-experience and Jake makes an intelligent comment, and turns it into a stupid comment as he always does. They see a strange, mysterious being that turns out to be a Vampire-Unicorn-Pegasus. Suddenly there is a zoom in on her heel and she trips over a small pebble in the grass. She trips and falls rolling into the trees. Finn yells "Shmowzow! Jake we gotta help!" Jake: "Eh, I'm fat." Then Finn grabs Jake's arm and they’re off into the forest to get her. The scene will then cut to a view behind them, peaking out of the bushes to see a black Vampire-Unicorn-Pegasus with cuts and scrapes all over it. Jake and Finn look at each other and Jake says in a mind-blown way "Finn that's a V.U.P, there was said to only be one in the world." Upon hearing voices the V.U.P cries out for help in Spanish “AYUDAME!”

The Big Decision

            In the story line the “Big Decision” will be the one made by Jake when it turns four-o’clock (his head rings like an alarm clock changing shape). This interrupts the montage and makes Jake pause to go to the jam session he always has with Lady Rainicorn. However he decides to continue adventuring with Finn and his new buddy VUP not realizing the consequences that may occur in the future for these actions. Meanwhile Lady Rainicorn waits upon the roof in which they always jam on. She realizes after a time lapse that Jake will not be attending and she goes to see Bubblegum Princess.

The “All is Lost Moment”

            Finn knows that VUP is from the Nightosphere, but he doesn’t know what to do about it. He realizes that she is pure evil and toying with Jake. She’s trying to ruin his relationship with Lady Rainicorn. Finn has tried telling Jake but hasn’t been able to because he sees how close he is to VUP. Jake might think Finn is jealous. Finn goes to Marceline and asks her what he should do. She says that it isn’t easy but he has to if he really loves his friend, even if it could hurt him. She told Finn that due to her powerful dad from the Nightosphere (The Lord of Evil) she is capable of sending VUP into the Nightosphere and to not be able to return. Finn and Marceline make a Pro Con list on Marceline’s white board (the white board has I<3LSP on it and a picture of LSP).

blog entry #8

1) Dialog is more movie-dramatic than it is real-life. Playing with how dialog sounds and the characters expressions and who they are.
2) Use supercharged atmosphere to create higher tension in already tense situation.
3) Don't make characters like you, dialog is the way to totally nail character, you need the right words to make the right characters and build their personalities..

#6

            We are making an episode of Adventure Time, therefore all of the characters are pre-established, but they undergo a new adventure to reach Finn’s ultimate goal of being a hero. The episode will begin with the main characters Finn and Jake walking through the woods in the land of Ooo. Finn questions aloud to Jake about what the meaning/purpose of their life is. Finn has a flashback to the first episode when his goals were written on his arm.  Jake makes a startlingly deep comment about the meaning of life and then turns it into something stupid like only Jake can do.  They hear a crash deeper in the woods and run to investigate the sounds of distress.

            To begin their adventure Finn and Jake meet V.U.P (Vampire Unicorn Pegasus) a “dark horse” and foil for Lady Rainicorn.  VUP had tripped over a rock while flying (she’s very clumsy and talks only in Spanish) and run into a tree, bruising her horn. Finn and Jake find her and bring her back to the tree house and nurse her back to health, afterwards the three go out into the land of Ooo to fulfill Finn’s bucket list making Lady Rainicorn jealous (Jakes girlfriend). Princess Bubblegum comforts Lady Rainicorn when Jake doesn’t go to their usual four o’clock jam session.

            A montage of Finn, Jake, and VUP slaying goblin hordes and doing the other things on Finns bucket list. There is an awkward stop in the montage in which LSP (Lumpy Space Princess) interacts with them. Lady Rainicorn finds them off on adventures and gets angry with Jake and flies away.  Jake is faced with an internal conflict of who to be with. He wants to be with his friends, but he already missed the four o’clock jam session. Finn eventually finds out that VUP is from the Nightosphere when he sees her come and go. He realizes she is pure evil, just toying with Jakes heart.

            Finn is conflicted with how he should tell Jake. He tries to tell him multiple times, and he can’t. However when Finn realizes his friend is in danger he gets help from Marceline (who is also from the Nightosphere). He asks her what he should do, and she says they should send her back into the Nightosphere and she has the power to make her stay there, because her father is The Lord of Evil from the Nightosphere.  They walk back to see Jake and VUP who are playing together.

            Marceline sees VUP and falls in love. She instantly claims that she wants her. She runs and jumps onto her back and they gallivant into the abyss. Lady Rainicorn and Jake make up and the four of them have a jam session. The screen goes back to VUP and Marceline still riding off. Everything seems happy ending until VUP disappears into the Nightosphere leaving Marceline behind. It zooms in on her disappointed face and the episode is over. None of the characters particularly changed but life lessons were learned, as well as morals.

#5 reeevision!

The only human in the land of Ooo embarks on a danerous journey to fulfill his bucketlist; will love be lost along the way with the introduction of a new mysterious friend.,