The greatest
strengths of our scene were the humor added that was consistent with Adventure
Time and the characterization that was also very consistent. We did also make
that scene our own though, adding in our own twists was very fun and writing
then showing the other person and making them laugh was very very entertaining.
The weaknesses of
the scene were probably the differences of viewpoint concerning the show, Jenny
and I have different opinions on how the show and all of it’s devices are
presented. Given more time it probably would have been more polished.
If I could rewrite
my scene I would improve mostly the dialogue. I know, even though Jenny and I are hardcore
fans, that we didn’t get all of the diction perfect for every one of the characters
and that would come with more research.. Aka sitting on the couch and watching
cartoons for a day or two, Ha.
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